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  • Cheers, Huddo!

  • I lied....this one is better, nearly spat my coffee all over the monitor!!

    http://generallucifer.wordpress.com/2010­/07/13/82-one-night-stand/

  • Just retread Four Minutes

    http://generallucifer.wordpress.com/2013­/05/17/106-four-minutes/

    Luci at his more powerful and eloquent.

  • a little tear in the eye from that one.

  • I've read them all now :-(

  • I'd better write some more then!

    I hope to write a new one today, but I've been a bit busy so far.

  • Please do!

    I really ought to write some about the things I've seen working in the motor trade...

  • Yikes.

  • I know. He genuinely freaked me out.

  • Definitely one to avoid at the Christmas party then...

  • Fucking. Hell.

  • Foot fetishist + 'quiet one' = serial killer

  • Bit early for Halloween Luci.

    Well told as usual.

  • I'm a bit concerned that the 'rapey' angle might be misconstrued.

    I'm not making light of it, it's just that it's such a constant presence in the factory, a very angry atmosphere focusing, sometimes, on women.

    It's bleak, but I'm just telling it how it is.

  • http://generallucifer.wordpress.com/2013­/08/30/111-flower/

    Bit of a delay, but here's a new one.

    Just tried accessing this over the "public" (not BYOD) wifi at work; I think the service is run in collaboration with BT.

    "Access might be restricted to some websites where the content is considered unsuitable to view in a public environment."

    Not sure whether I'm surprised that such a filter is in place, or that your tales are considered unsuitable!

  • I'm a bit concerned that the 'rapey' angle might be misconstrued.

    I'm not making light of it, it's just that it's such a constant presence in the factory, a very angry atmosphere focusing, sometimes, on women.

    It's bleak, but I'm just telling it how it is.

    Very reminiscent of the motor industry!!

    One tiny typo at the end, "been" instead of "being".

  • Just tried accessing this over the "public" (not BYOD) wifi at work; I think the service is run in collaboration with BT.

    "Access might be restricted to some websites where the content is considered unsuitable to view in a public environment."

    Not sure whether I'm surprised that such a filter is in place, or that your tales are considered unsuitable!

    I've been told my stuff is filtered out here or there - it's what comes of being a potty mouth.

    I don't think the subject matter of this particular story helps, to be honest.

  • Very reminiscent of the motor industry!!

    One tiny typo at the end, "been" instead of "being".

    Corrected now. Cheers!

  • Actually, I've pulled the whole story.

    I've re-read and it isn't right at all.

    It's true stuff, but the way it's written...

    Apologies.

  • Balls. I'm 15hrs too late!

  • ^^ Good move Luci.

    It was well observed and written, but I think it could only be part of bigger piece pulling out the issues.

    As it was it could have been deeply humiliating to the entirely blameless person stuck in the middle of it, should they ever have read it.

    Still, made me think and if I'm honest feel pretty uncomfortable in my shoes. The underlying issues run pretty deep.

    Annnnd....I'm off to the memes thread to look at pictures of cats for a while.

  • Thanks Gizmorat. I've not had a story go quite that spectacularly wrong before, and to have posted it without properly looking at it again was a massive mistake. Fucking lazy of me.

    My focus was on the blokes, but the story ended up tilting in a horrible way at women, and sounded deeply misogynistic when I re-read it.

    That feedback is extremely helpful, Gizmorat. I'll work on the story again, make it longer, cut the shit out of it.

  • Balls. I'm 15hrs too late!

    I haz email ;-)

  • Just retread Four Minutes

    http://generallucifer.wordpress.com/2013­/05/17/106-four-minutes/

    Luci at his more powerful and eloquent.

    Remember this one from a few months back. Brilliantly told.

    (p.s. small typo "you're bag" para 7ish)

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